The Legend of Slottsfjellet: Chapter Three (Part 9)

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Joe was awakened by the sound of keys at the trailer door. He sat up and looked out the window. He could see that it was just beginning to get dark, but he couldn’t see who was outside. He folded his arms in a show of impatience and watched the door as it opened.

The first thing through the doorway was a tray piled high with food. Joe couldn’t see a face—it was obscured by the food on the tray—but the legs coming into the room were distinctly female. Joe had trouble not staring.

The tray came down, revealing a face that was prettier than the legs it belonged to. The woman had long, blonde hair, perfect red lips, and bright blue eyes. Joe was awestruck and couldn’t seem to say anything. She spoke without hesitation.

Hallo,” she said, smiling sweetly, “jeg heter Marta.”

“Um, I uh… I don’t speak Norwegian,” Joe managed to get out.

“I’m terribly sorry,” she apologized in rather good English. “I said my name is Marta.”

“Well, it’s very nice to meet you, Marta.” He had composed himself, and flashed an impudent smile. “I’m sure you already know who I am. Everyone so far seems to know quite a lot about me.”

“Actually, they told me nothing about you—not even your name. I assumed you were just another employee of Mr. Lund. They sent me with food.”

“Please, then, call me Joe.”

“All right, Joe,” she repeated with a grin, and set down the tray. “Here is your food. It is only a snack, but it should be enough for now.”

“Thanks, Marta,” Joe said, and smiled at her. She returned it with a smile and a wink.

“Perhaps I will see you again,” she said as she moved to the doorway. “It would be nice to—” she paused, searching for just the right words, then finished, “learn more about you.”

“Yeah… bye,” he smiled after she was gone.

Joe turned to the “snack,” which consisted of approximately two full meals’ worth of bread, cheese, fish, and fruit—bread was by far the most abundant item on the tray. Whatever else they’re doing, at least they’re not trying to starve me, he thought as he began eating.

14 comments on “The Legend of Slottsfjellet: Chapter Three (Part 9)

  1. Rossio says:

    “Joe couldn’t see a face—it was obscured by the food on the tray:”

    I think the image that you were trying to build was obscured by the use of the word obscured in the sentence. What exactly was the image supposed to be? Was the food piled up so high that it blocked her face? Who carries a tray that high? 🙂

  2. Rossio says:

    So is it blond or blonde? I think I remember seeing blond in an earlier section and now I’m seeing blonde.

  3. Rossio says:

    He needs something to drink on that tray. So much food and nothing to wash it down with.

  4. Rossio says:

    “Yeah…bye” seems kind of awkward. Is that really how you would respond? A pretty girl says that she looks forward to getting to know more about you and all you can say is “Yeah…bye”?

    Maybe it works, but I’d have to see the movie version to see how it was said.

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